Tuesday, January 13, 2009

my logical poetry (or my poetic logic)

my poetry is now wholly mine,
not for who it is for, not anymore.

and it becomes more his, more about him,
more not about myself.

and as i write more about him,
with words more mine,

he becomes more mine.

13 comments:

  1. yep, grasping logic as astounding as this can only come from someone . . . illogical? hahaha. love you, bata. wonderful lines.

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  2. tsktsktsk, so u to turn one innocent thread into porn . . . ü hahahahahahü

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  3. i so miss our after-office drinks . . . i am so most dumb sober jud . . . maybe i was most happy when i was most sad . . . *sigh*

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  4. we are always less wrong when we are drunk. i went out last night and was missing you (i should stay indoors and forget you, haha). but then, you are in love, no need to fret. :)

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  5. hahahahü oh no, u shud go out . . . i'm not selfish; i don't mind sharing you with the world . . . hehehehehü the manong guard with his towelled head must have thought you were an angel too . . . nyahahahahü

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  6. hahahahü oh no, u shud go out . . . i'm not selfish; i don't mind sharing you with the world . . . hehehehehü the manong guard with his towelled head must have thought you were an angel too . . . nyahahahahü

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  7. yeahhhh, the world, the world . . . lately i'm thinking of going to a casino, throw a dice and give a rich ole man a wet kiss---win or lose. i'm thinkin' of bringing a good read in a nudist beach, strip, and have the feel of reading and lying on powdery white sands under the noonday sun naked. i'm thinkin' of goin' to sri lanka, madrid, the carribean, hawaii, oh, to travel and shop. i'm thinkin' of regurgitating my puke in the streets of paris after too much beer. i'm thinkin' how the the breeze of mexico smells after i blow my marlboro in that city's air. . . oh, lorelie, wanna share this with me? haha

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  8. oh yes, ma chère . . . but first i'll have to grab my old pair of air or airs, whichever, and run my way all over the park where macarthur's statue stands (which is near my new office here)---so i could take your offer on that nudist beach, so i could have a decent external anatomy to show a nonlover's eyes . . . hehehehehehü and sri lanka sounds okay to me, unless it's a place where i can get shot on the spot for the misdemeanors i'm sure i would eventually do after puking all over their streets . . . ü and what shall be your name then, mis cara?ü

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  9. oh yes, ma chère . . . but first i'll have to grab my old pair of air or airs, whichever, and run my way all over the park where macarthur's statue stands (which is near my new office here)---so i could take your offer on that nudist beach, when i already have a decent external anatomy to show a nonlover's eyes . . . hehehehehehü and sri lanka sounds okay to me, unless it's a place where i can get shot on the spot for the misdemeanors i'm sure i would eventually do after puking all over their streets . . . ü and what shall be your name then, mia cara?ü

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  10. and i will be Dowry, Lorelie. you know, like those treasures the royals give away in exchange of something boidegradable (like a human body) that makes them happy more than those idle treasures. but then, on the brighter side, maybe one of those heirlooms---the crown, prob'ly--that makes kings kings and queens queens. Yeh, I wanna be Dowry, the one y'all give away. and I will live through the ages and be everywhere. Dowry and Lorelie---everywhere. :)

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